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WOULD YOU LIKE YOUR MANUSCRIPT 
CRITIQUED BY ANDREA?

I am a consultant for the critique company Adventures in Fiction http://www.adventuresinfiction.co.uk so if you have written a picture book or other young children's fiction and would like a detailed manuscript appraisal then please contact Adventures and ask for me to be your consultant. You'll get a comprehensive and honest report covering presentation, language, plot, characterisation, illustration (if applicable) as well as recommendations to help you get your story published.

 

also

 

FOR COMPREHENSIVE INSIDER KNOWLEDGE
I also have a brand new ebook called
Get Your Children's Picture Book Published 


It's huge, it contains actual picture book plans, formatted title pages, tried-and-tested template letters you can use to send your own manuscripts out to publishers and even the text of one of my best-selling picture books exactly as it was originally sent to publishers to help you format, present (and sell) your own stories. Plus 113 pages covering everything you need to know about the picture book market and selling your work. 

 Introductory price is £9.99. Email me here  giving your your name and accurate email address so I can contact you with full details).

 

How to get your book published - short article

An honest look at what to do (and what not to do) © Andrea Shavick

* Note: this article is mostly about children's fiction & picture books but also has some hints and tips about adult fiction, non-fiction & self-publishing. Alternatively there are links to great writing books here

INTRODUCTION  

It isn't easy to get published - it took Jacqueline Wilson over 20 years before she finally had a book accepted, Roald Dahl and JK Rowling all had their work rejected by absolutely everyone, and Enid Blyton even had to marry a publisher to get her books accepted! I'm not going to suggest you do that. Not yet anyway!

So here are some general tips to help you:

Number one - if you're serious about getting published, either in book form or in magazines and newspapers you will need the most recent copy of The  Writer's and Artist's Yearbook.  It contains a comprehensive list of publishers and agents ( UK and overseas) together with names, addresses and details of what types of books they are looking for.  It's not expensive, I use it and so does every other author on the planet - and no I am not on commission!

Here's a link so you can buy it from Amazon now:


 

You'll need the latest copy (copies in libraries are always out of date). 

If you're sure you only want to write for children either buy Writer's and Artist as detailed above, or try The Children's Writers and Artist. Here's a link to Amazon for this book:


 

 

If you're in the USA then the Children's Writers and Illustrators Market is also good).

MANUSCRIPT SUBMISSION

Make sure you send your ms (manuscript) to a publisher who is interested in your type of book. In other words don’t send picture book fiction to a publisher who only publishes non-fiction. If in doubt, ring and ask for their catalogue or look at their website. This advice may seem blindingly obvious but I can assure you every non-fiction publisher receives mountains of picture books stories every week - and they all go in the bin. If you were them, you'd do the same.

When you send you ms out, present it professionally. The books mentioned above give advice on this, and there are lots of websites to help you too. I have a huge section in my new ebook to help you but the absolute basics would be:

-         Use a font like Arial or Times New Roman 12 regular, double spaced

-         Check spelling and punctuation carefully. No mistakes!

-         Put contact details on every single sheet of your ms.

-         Send a covering letter with your manuscript. Sum up the story in a few sentences and say a little about yourself and your writing history. DON'T say things like, "My children love it.” Be professional.

-         Enclose a SAE. If you don’t they will not reply.

-         Put the correct postage on the letter containing your ms.  If it doesn't have enough stamps, the publisher will  NOT go and collect it from the Post Office!

WHAT TO SEND

If it’s a children's picture book story - send the WHOLE text. Don't send three sentences. Don't say it's great, here's my telephone number! Send the whole thing. 

For picture books DON'T send illustrations unless you are a professional illustrator

For longer fiction you generally need to send a synopsis and some example chapters 

LENGTH OF TEXT

Children’s picture books are usually 32 pages long and the text is based around twelve double page spreads. That means you turn the page 12 times. Get some picture books from the library to familiarise yourself with the format.

This doesn't mean that you should send a 32 page dummy book. Your ms should simply be printed on white A4 paper, double spaced. More than one sheet can be stapled together.

As for actual word count – for children’s picture books aim for less than 600.  If you can get it down to 300 you're a genius!

WHAT DO PICTURE BOOK PUBLISHERS WANT?

The million dollar question. They want stuff with child appeal, parent appeal (remember the adult will read the book to the child), some excitement and possibly a twist ending. They also have to be easy to illustrate. And have a happy ending.

OTHER TIPS FOR PICTURE BOOKS

-         Unless you want a sack full of rejections, steer clear of witches, religion, anti-religion, sexism, anything connected with your particular locality or country, swear words, local slang, racism, ageism, gender bias or sexism. When they say they want 'edgy and different' they really mean play it safe.

-         Avoid showing dangerous situations which a young child might copy, for example flying (sorry Peter Pan, you've been rejected). Other 'danger' items include fireworks, balloons, candles, fire and all weapons.

-         Don't write anything scary unless your age group is over 10

-         Don't bother with issue books ie 'Billy was a bully' as they’ve all been done to death.

-         Unless you are a brilliant poet, don't rhyme. Rhyme does not translate.

-         Don't try to be funny. British humour does not translate to the rest of the world (nobody else understands sarcasm either). They don't like wacky either which is very unfortunate in my case as nearly all my picture books are wacky)

-         If you’re writing longer fiction or stories for older children and teenagers then you don't need to worry so much about language or topic, or even international appeal.

Remember I am mostly talking about picture books for 2-5 year olds.

HOW TO GO ABOUT SELF-PUBLISHING YOUR OWN BOOK
Find an illustrator. Find a designer. (Get a bank loan!) Alternatively do it yourself. To typeset professionally you'll need Quark or similar program. MS Publisher and Word are ok for leaflets but not really for a professional looking book. Learn all about book binding and papers and laminating. Find yourself a professional printer who has experience of printing the same type of book you want. Buy a bar code and an ISBN number, remember your verso page and copyright notices. Allow at least 6 months for the steep learning curve and for re-growing your hair which you've pulled out several times. Finally, once you have ten boxes of 100 books sitting in your front hallway, don't forget to send copies to the British Library etc and to sell your book into shops and libraries, and Amazon. That's when you'll discover that self publishing your book was the easy bit! Oh and there's no money in it.

Having said all that, I've done it very successfully with Grandma was Eaten by a Shark!

Whatever you do, DON'T PAY A VANITY PUBLISHER. A vanity publisher is a shark who tells you they love your story but then asks for a 'contribution' towards the costs of publishing. That is not self-publishing. That's being conned.

WHAT ABOUT NON-FICTION?

Are you an expert in any particular field? Is it something people want to know about? Are you a teacher with any particular educational interest?

If you are, ring up non-fiction and/or educational publishers to see what they need.

Tip – many non-fiction publishers have submission guidelines on their websites.

Remember, with non-fiction you do not need to have already written the book. Look at the submission guidelines and see what is actually required before you do any writing.

DO YOU NEED AN AGENT?

For picture books and non-fiction – not necessarily.

For adult and teenage fiction – probably yes.

WHY PEOPLE GET REJECTIONS

Don’t worry about rejections - even great writers get hundreds. Think of each one as being one step nearer your goal. If you get very upset every time you receive a rejection, your skin's not thick enough. Read my comments about Dahl and JK Rowling at the top of the page again. No one ever got their ms accepted first time. Except me (but that's another story).

Also - just because your book is rejected doesn't mean it's no good. It might simply be wrong for that publisher. They might have something similar already. They might not have space on the list. They may not be able to think of a suitable illustrator. They might not think your book is commercial enough. Maybe the ‘reader’ was incapable of recognising brilliant writing when they saw it. Maybe they were too busy taking their cat to the vet. Who knows.

Some rejections are very impersonal, others gush about how wonderful the story was, or how it made the entire editorial team fall off their chairs laughing.....but it's just not quite right for their list. Ho hum. I hate rejections like that.

All rejections from publishers will be polite. On the other hand, rejections from agents will be downright rude. Don't worry - it's not personal. 

FINALLY

Whatever you do keep writing.. If a publisher or agent likes your stuff, the first thing they’ll say is, "What else have you got." If you’re a one-book-writer they'll lose interest. Above all, do the following:

1. Send the manuscript. IT IS NO GOOD IN THE FILING CABINET. 

2. Never send original illustrations, or your only copy of a text.

3. Don't write because you think authors make loads of money. IT'S NOT TRUE. Only write because you love writing.

I hope this helps, good luck

Andrea

P.S. this article is copyright so if you'd like to use it for your magazine (or would like me to write you something longer/shorter etc) please email me to discuss it. 

 

WOULD YOU LIKE YOUR MANUSCRIPT 
CRITIQUED BY ANDREA?

I am a consultant for the critique company Adventures in Fiction http://www.adventuresinfiction.co.uk so if you have written a picture book or other young children's fiction and would like a detailed manuscript appraisal then please contact Adventures and ask for me to be your consultant. You'll get a comprehensive and honest report covering presentation, language, plot, characterisation, illustration (if applicable) as well as recommendations to help you get your story published.

FOR COMPREHENSIVE INSIDER KNOWLEDGE
I also have a brand new ebook called
Get Your Children's Picture Book Published 


It's huge, it contains actual picture book plans, formatted title pages, tried-and-tested template letters you can use to send your own manuscripts out to publishers and even the text of one of my best-selling picture books exactly as it was originally sent to publishers to help you format, present (and sell) your own stories. Plus 113 pages covering everything you need to know about the picture book market and selling your work. 

  Introductory price is £9.99. Email me here  giving your your name and accurate email address so I can contact you with full details).

 

Here are some of the recommended book links to buy from Amazon again - more ideas for interesting websites to visit if you're a writer on the Writing Link page here.

 

 

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