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This extremely long page contains emails I've received recently about my books, poems, and the new Get Published page. More pages click here or here

If you want to contribute or send me a message click here
  Note: some, but not all of the feedback re psychometric test books has been moved here.
And reviews of Playing Poker to Win are here

and if you've enjoyed one of my books, please please submit a nice review to www.amazon.co.uk  

 

NAME: Shloka Mariwala

Dear Andrea,

My teacher asked our class - Std V to learn a short funny poem. I really loved your poem about Black Holes. May I narrate it in my classroom? Regards,  Shloka Mariwala.

NAME: Sue Wicks

Having searched long and hard for a simple and easy to understand guide to publishng a children's book I was relieved to discover you website.

Thank you.

(I don't think I've been put off yet.)

NAME: NAvjat

The poem that i liked thre besy was miss picky !!!!!GREAT POEM!!!!!

 

NAME: *~*Baby Gigglez*~*

I REALLY LIKED ALL THESE POEMS THAT ARE ON YOUR PAGE THESE PEOPLE HAVE TALENT IN WRITING WHAT THEY WRITE

KEEP THIS PAGE GOING

*~*BABII GIGGLEZ *~*

NAME: Lucy Wetton

Dear Andrea,

Thank you for an amusing and really informative read. It feels like you have just provided me with an insight to the secret 'Authors world' with a pinch of blunt, yet realistic advice thrown in for good measure.

I have found your advice really helpful and I look forward to my first attempt at getting published!

Thanks once again!

Lucy (Cambridge)

 

NAME: Linda Clode

I am an absolute neophyte who really appreciates your witty information.

However, now that I am overwhelmed, I will put my 8 stories back in their box and wait awhile before I again consider getting them published.

I do love golfing.

Thanks, Linda

 

Hello Andrea,

I'm sure you get emails like this all the time but I really need some help. I have an interview / assessment centre this Friday and as part of the process I have to do an Fastrack test, which I believe is part of the SHL groups testing portfolio. The only problem is I can't find any examples of these type of test so I can practice.

Can you help. I'm just out to buy your book now but if you could point me in the right direction or even send me a sample Fatrack test or similar I would be eternally grateful.

Stuart

 

NAME: liam

my skool is swalloowdale im in melton mowbray and England i love all of your work it isd the best ever

Hi Andrea,

what u been up to i really like the poems their aswome for realz i really like reading poems.

Hilaria Ochoa  13 years old

ok thank you so much but its time to be honest my real name is caroline  i go to school in tampa I would love it if you could come and do a school visit. i love and enjoy all of your poems excpecially my old mummy write back soon i really didnt want to mencian my name at first because i didnt want to get blackmailed 

Blackmailed!

 

NAME: Cora

In: Bushey

Hi. You visited my school a couple of weeks ago and I just wanted to say i really enjoyed hearing about your books. Also I'd like to buy a book of yours but im not sure which one. What would you reccomend?

 

NAME: Talia

Hi andrea do u remember when u came 2 Highwood primary school 2 open our libary? I was dressed up as tinkerbell if u saw me i love your books and poems i think there great!!! xxxxxx Talia

 

NAME: Marc Mitchard

Hi Andrea

My friend and I are in the process of producing a childrens story/picture book (there is a second in the pipe line too) . My friend has written the story and I have illustrated. I know in your get published page you suggest not sending art work but the idea for us was to do something creative together. So my first question is will this hold us back if we want to stick with original art work and why?

You can send the story and the artwork, just make it clear you don't mind if they reject one half of the duo. Otherwise if they hate the artwork, the whole proposal will be rejected. 

 

NAME: Chrissy-T

Dear Andrea,

I am working on a presentation, and i was just reading your poems. WOWEEE!!! they're really nice!
I would like to use one of them from my visual project (a poster). Don't worry. I'll write it's by you.But what is your last name?

Do you know, Chrissy T,    I believe it begins with an S.

 

I just love the poem called "Miss Picky!" It relates to my LA teacher and I just HAVE to share it with her.

Keep writing!

lianna

 

NAME: Leigh Kemp

Hello,

i have read the whole of you 'how to get published' and im now scared!

i'm 19 and i'm just finishing my first fantasy story. i have now learnt that i should send it everywhere and not hope for much, and even if someone does take an interest i will need other stories in the bank for them to invest in me.  i am planing other things, but when i feel pressured to write nothing comes out.

Thank you for your time!

Leigh Kemp

NAME: Sandra

I'm wondering, for my granddaughter, if writers of poems accepted by this site are compensated.

Oh dear - maybe you'd like to 'compensate' me towards the considerable costs of running this site. Seriously, publishers only pay authors if they make money from their work.

Hi Andrea,

I think your poem "Predictable" is great and would like my Year 1 class at Altrincham Preparatory School to recite it at our end-of-year prize giving event. Please could you let me know if this will be ok and how much we will have to pay. Thanks very much.

Liz Atkinson

On the other hand, I think I've been more than compensated by receiving this one. 
PS I never charge anything, just quote me as author. 

 

NAME: Phillipa Bayliss

Dear Andrea,

This 'page' has been bookmarked in my 'cheer-me-up' folder (I also write notes to myself with inspiring quotes for the much needed 'cheer-me-up' moments). It's so encouraging to read your words, and laugh over rejections - really! We all know we mustn't give up, it's not personal, etc, but they do eat away at your confidence and hope. I mean, what if my work IS rubbish? What if it NEVER attracks an agent or editor's interest? How many times is it 'normal' to be told "no thanks" (Yikes! Have I had more "no's" than normal?)... and so it goes.

I'm going to try to get hold of your books - I think you've made a fan of me, just by being approachable and encouraging! Thank you so much! I do apologise for rambling on (there's nothing better than a consoling fellow writer to open up to).

I wish you every success,

Phillipa, Canada

NAME: Paula McBride

Great site, I really enjoyed reading and giggling through "Get Published".

 

NAME: Hillary vasuqez

Andrea You chose some good poems and I always go this poetry page and I always find good poems and the poems you write are really nice too god bless your taste for poems and you are a real poet sincerely ,Hillary v

 

NAME: Kalp Pat

Hi my name is kalp from london, i am apply for a finance graduate posiition and i will be reqired to do a SHL verbal reasoning and Numerical reasoning test. I was hoping you could advise me on possible resources of help and the best way to pass these tests with high marks. I have done one SHL test before and i didnt do so well in it.

 

NAME: Maeve O'Mahony

I would like permission to use the wonderful poem 'Advent Horizon' as part of my English classes this term.

Thank you

Maeve O'Mahony, Concordia Lutheran College, Toowoomba Australia

 

NAME: Mary

Hi! I want to use the poem that talked about how to persuade your parents to give you more pocket money for poem in the pocket day. I loved that poem. Plus really I am am a natrual persuader.... I persuaded my sister to dump out the ice cream she hates.....

Dear Ms. Shavick:

My fourth grade class is studing poets. My teacher assigned me you. I really like your poetry, especially the nasty, grusome bloodthirsty ones :) . Please come visit if you are ever in Florida!

Thanks,  Jake Pinckney, Gorrie Elementary School,  Florida USA

 

NAME: Allison Kelly

Hello,

I was looking for poems to use on my screen saver for my home computer. nothin big! just a really cool poem and i really liked yours... can i copy it and use it on my screen saver?

Thanks,Allison

NAME: Alastair Bishop

Just a quick note to say thank you very much for your article on getting published. I found it really useful.

Cheers Alastair

NAME: miss nits

I really like the poem miss nits it is a very funny poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

 

NAME: Jacqueline

Hi! I used to work for Mills & Boon (oh, yes, I did). I was a production editor so I didn't have to read the slush pile, thank god (I'm afraid romantic fiction was never my cup of tea. Anyway, I'm thinking of writing a novel and I find your advice absolutely great.

Best wishes,  Jacqueline

NAME: Mr Robert Scott

Hi first of all I found just about everything here interesting and a few things use full. I am in the process of writting my first book.

 

NAME: zainab

Hi Andrea I haven't read any of your poems but by what I saw here many love your work and you won't believe I loved your work before reading any

I hope I'll read soon and I was so impressed with the feedback here and your title were amazing.

I also do write poems and which oneday I wish to publish them in book. I post most of my poems in poetry forum

And thanks to God I get lot of feedback , that's like a part of my life

I told you I'll be back

And yes here I am d:

You are an amazing writer. And I really loved your poems in Grandma was eaten by a shark

My best of the best poem is Poor Daniel

Very good poem is Grandma was eaten by a shark and Grandma gone

And the poems which were good

HenriettaBat

Auntie Betty thinks she is bat girl

Auntie janet

Miss Nits

And the remain were not bad there were fine

I just loved your work d:

NAME: Krystle Appiah

Dear Ms Shavick, My name is Krystle and I love to write. I live in Romford, Essex. I am currently writing 2 books which are about 2 sisters that are very close. The books are filled with love, loss and tragedy. Could you please give me some advice on finding an agent and publisher.

 

Dear Andrea,

Hi i am 11 years old. I live in Hong Kong(Where there may be King Kong, just kidding).

I am very imaginative, creative, patient, brave and cocparating girl(or alien!) What I mostly do at home is reading, drawing, doing expriences, making up poems and stories and tidying my room.

I want to ask you a question: Where did you get your ideas from? I got mine from all over the world!!! I am always writing about aliens!

From Janice Alien

 

NAME: Michael Taylor

Hi, my name's Michael and I live in the Scottish Borders. I have currently written a fantasy book which is the first part of a trilogy. Could you tell me what my chances are of getting the book published whilst I am writing the second story? The title of the book is 'Twins' and the next two are to be called 'Betrayal' and 'War'. Thanks!

NAME: Sarah Emmott

I am a 35 year old graduate and have an interview with an investment bank. I have been told that as part of the process I will be asked to sit a psychometric test. I wanted to buy one of your books for practice but am not sure which of Psychometric tests for graduates or Management level psychometric tests would be the higher level of tests?

thanks Sarah

the Management Level book has more advanced tests and is more suitable for the type of job you're after

NAME: Jason John Whitehouse-Strudwick

Where do I begin I have read your site top to bottom and I have absorbed a lot of valuable information.

I have written 12 picture book stories but they are all in ryhme it looks like I may have to self publish having read your site. JJW-S

 

NAME: Gail Jones

I would like your permission to use some of your poems with my class. After discovering your website I think my year 4s would love your poems, they would appeal to their humour.

I would like to print off the people and school poems so that they could use them to write poems in a similar style. I would like to use them on World Book Day.

Kewaigue School is a primary school on the Isle of Man, I've been teaching year 4 at the school for the last 10 years. I've found that some of the most memorable and enjoyable lessons for the children and myself have involved poetry.

 

NAME: Charlotte Wakefield

Hello Andrea,

I am a primary school teacher at St Peter's School in Chippenham, England I'm about to do a class assembly and would like my children to perform some of your poems. We have been learning about Space and have just starter a literacy unit on performance poetry so it seems natural to combine the two.

I particularly like "Auntie Ethel the Extraterrestrial", "Black Holes" amd "Watch out". I am sure the children will enjoy performing them - with your permission!

Thanks, and best wishes,

Charlotte Wakefield.

Hi Andrea,

I have just read your Get Published Page, and was wondering if the format you listed for picture books applies to ABC and 123 books as well. The book I have comprised is written in verse. (oh well!) Any advice would be greatly appreciated.

J. Ellis

NAME: Fiona Neil

Great tips! Thanks.

Fiona, West Wales

NAME: Ami Humphreys

Can i please use your poem miss picky to read out to my class tomorrow?

I go to Hall Mead in upminster but i live in harold wood england essex.

I prommis that i will write that you wrote it at the bottom of the poem.

NAME: Audrey c Bartholomew

Thank you for all the great info and wish me luck in fallowing my dream!

NAME: Ms Hobby

My son, George aged 6, is taking part in a school poetry recital competition nest week and he really likes your poem 'Predictable'. It sums up perfectly the kind of conversation we have with each other. Please may he have your permission to use it. Thank you.

 

NAME: sally-mum of twins-also a teacher!

Thanks for the great advice-

I have found writing a fantastic release from the struggle of raisng my gorgeous but demanding twins and am determined to share my writing. I would love to write as a freelance writer and am aiming to get a book on my first year with the twins published. Youtr tips have been so helpful and have me all fired up to get somewhere!!

 

NAME: Julie

I appreciated your practical and witty article on getting published!

 

NAME: Gill Clemens

Thanks for the advice on getting published - very comprehensive and realistic. I've thought about it for so long and have decided it's time I just got on with it, so it's helpful to be able to find guidance like yours on the Internet.

 

 

NAME: Kelly Williams

Hi Andrea,

I am completing a PGCE primary course in Bangor University in Wales and would like to ask if it would be possible to include your 'Advent Horizon' poem and 'Auntie Ethel the Extraterrestrial' poem in a poetry anthology for my english assignment. We are creating a teaching pack, which can be used to improve boy's reading abilities. I am basing my pack on science fiction and space and we have to include a number of poems on our theme in the pack as well as a fiction/non-fiction book, video and website. I really enjoyed reading the poems and would like to include the poems in my pack because they are humorous and I think boy's would enjoy reading them.

NAME: Ranita

Fairview International School,  Malaysia

Hey Andrea! I loved all your school poems... They are really fun to read... Even I write poems and its nice and fun to read yours... :) Bye!

PS: I only read the school poems... :)

 

NAME: Lesley-Ann Jones Shine

Dear Andrea

Your poems are fantastic!

My daughter Bridie, 7 yrs old, has to read a poem in class about school ... she has chosen your 'Predictable' poem. Would it be ok with you for us to print the poem so that she can take it in to school? 

Lesley-Ann Jones Shine

 

NAME: Cross Country

i really liked it! It was very funny! My favorite above all!

 

 

NAME: K Glessinger

Dear Andrea

I thought the info on getting published was really helpful.

NAME: kayla Laux

I just love this site. I think this is a great thing to see all these young kids and teenagers writting poems and for everyone to see how good they are i also write poems I have a 75 right now and hope to have many more as time goes on. I am 15 years old and i think this poems on here form other teenagers are so really and show how they feel.

NAME: Sophie Lloyd

I luv da poem called unstable auntie i think it is gr8 k cya

NAME: kayla Laux

I just love this site i am 15 years old and i love poems i enjoy writing them as well!

NAME: Scarlet Stapleton

Good evening Andrea, I have been asked to find a funny poem for my school homework and I really like your 'School Poems'. Would you mind if i copied them and used them for my School work?

Thank you in anticipation

Scarlet Stapleton (aged 10)

Essex

 

NAME: Elizabeth Saldana

Hi my name is Elizabeth Saldana and i attend Natalia High School. I was woundering if we (students) can use one of your poems for our next year planner. We are located at Natalia, TX

 

 

NAME: Ethan Cook

Hi Andrea

My name is Ethan and I am 12. I would like to use your poem Miss Nits for a project at school. We have to say what our favourite poem is and then write one of our own.

NAME: Hope Jensen

Hello Andrea,

I would like to use your "Things I did for luck" poem on my superstition report for my Boise State University Psychology learning class. It is an APA paper that will just be viewed by my teacher for grading. Thanks, Hope

 

NAME: Aaliyah

To Andrea,

The poem that i liked best is Miss nits because i don't want nits because thier really nasty but if they were infected then nobody woul want nits because thier friends will say"err.....she nasty stay away from that Nit's girl/boy."

 

NAME: kathy otto

Hi,

Thanks for all your tips - certainly food for thought. I have a range of ms I have written and smiled to myself at your NO GOOD IN A FILING CABINET comment. I have three children's books and four scripts as well as too many unfinished pieces to mention.

 

 

NAME: Antonio

Hello Andrea. My name´s Antonio. Congratulations for your exquisite web.

There are really good poems.

 

NAME: Reeta Sood

Hello Andrea,

I have just finished your "Management Level Psychometric & Assessment Tests". I think its brilliant! I'd highly recommend it to anyone trying to appear in Psychometric tests at any level.

I look forward to another book with more practice questions similar to these.

 

 

NAME: Maria Calderon

With your permission, I would like to use your space poems as a sample to teach a language arts 4th grade pretend classroom, in connection to a thematic unit that I have to put together for a SXU professor.

I promis to make sure, they always display your copyright!

They are wonderful!

 

NAME: Bex

First off may I say how helpful your website was! No, really I know what your thinking... "Yeah yeah, heard it all before!" but I mean it.

Bex, age 13 from Frome.

 

Hi Andrea,I really like your poems. there all nice, am always so interested to read poems about school! and the best poems I ever red are the ones you made!they are really nice. I want to know about you and like to be your friend.

Am 11 years old and am in grade six. and am from Muscat the capital of Oman

 

 

NAME: James

I've found this page realy helpfull, and somewhat insperatinal. Thank you!

althgough i am only about half way through my first ms, i've got a realy good felling about it. (don't worry i'm not going to get my hopes up to high)

The biggest heardle i have to overcome is that i suffer quite seaverly from Dyslexia! (as i'm shaw you can tell)

So if i were ever to be published... well lets just say that would be one hell of an acheavmet for me! and something i allways will strive to acheve.

once again thank you for your advice!

Yours thankfully

James (Birmingham UK)

 

NAME: Michelle Marroquin

Your poems are really cool and very interisting to me and my parents like them to so I hope you write some more NEW poems soon Well good bye!!!

 

 

NAME: Jackie

My name is Jackie and I would like to use your poem advent horizon for one of my lesson that i will be teaching. I go to the Unviersity of texas at san antonio and i am in the process of getting certified as a teacher. I need to teach lessons and I would like to use your poem to accompany my lesson. Thanks Jackie

 

Hello Andrea,

I have just finished your "Management Level Psychometric & Assessment Tests". I think its brilliant! I'd highly recommend it to anyone trying to appear in Psychometric tests at any level.

I look forward to another book with more practice questions similar to these.

Reeta Sood

Hi Andrea
I have never written before but love reading and have some ideas about a screenplay script and a non-fiction book both aimed at adults. I found your practical tips and honest advice very helpful in getting me thinking seriously about what steps I need to take if I am going to take this seriously.

Sabrina Aries, Milton Keynes

I've just read through these gems on getting published and I all I can think of is it was pretty deflating and can't think how anyone got a book published ever. Not exactly encouraging. Would there really be no positives to pass on?   Karen Renshaw, Chesterfield

As I've mentioned before, I'm not trying to put people off writing, just being honest. To succeed you need to be really determined.

Good Morning Andrea,

Thank you for this web site, and all the wonderful points you mentioned. I feel I have learned a great deal already.

Best regards,  Robin Berlanti

NAME: jessica vickery

i think the best poem was miss picky!

NAME: wendy

i don't wanna put it in anything i just wanna show my friends!lol those poems ROCK!!

Hello Andrea,

My name is Pandora and I would like to read one of your poems out to my class. I am in Year 5 at Manly State School (Brisbane, Australia) and my teacher, Mr Smith, has set an assignment where we have to learn a poem by heart and recite it to our class. We can use props or costumes as well. Can you please tell me if I am allowed to use your poem about "Miss Picky". I think this one is funny. Thankyou  Pandora

NAME: Nel

I found your Get Published page very useful

NAME: amira

ur peoms r funny ! i don't like them

I am teaching a summer music camp in which we are exploring the composition process. I would like to use your poem "DISGUSTING (BUT LUCKY)" with my class of 12 high school students. They will be putting the poem to music as a part of this lesson.Thank you for your kind consideration.

Dr. Matthew P. Fritz
Assistant Professor of Music
Elizabethtown College

dear andrea,

my name is almas khan and i live in pakistan islamabad.i study in grade 5.i love u and ur poems.i love the poem which is called miss picky.its very funny.when ever i m depressed or sad i read that poem and become happy again

hi i'm a primary school teacher and mother of 2 tiny children. I found your article extremely helpful and enjoyable to read. Now i have had my babies, my ambition is to have a young children's book published as i have been writing since i was 10. I would also like to write a book about practical tips for helping children to foster an interest in reading.

Thank-you for your advice  gillian

hey, im laura
i wold just like to say that your poems are great.
my favourite is "Miss Picky" from the school section. i was realkly moved be it. it had a fantastic sense of humour.
School: Grace Lutheran College
Location: Brisbane,

I really identify with the "Predicatable" poem on your website, these are exactly the words my 6 year old daughter uses when I ask her the exact same questions. Thank you. I wish to pass this particular poem on to some female colleagues who are all suffering with 'return to schoolitis' from their varied aged children.

Many thanks for making me smile!  Ann J Merritt

Hi Andrea -

I was bouncing around Roger Stevens' web site this afternoon which eventually led me to yours. Wonderful work and resources! You're one busy and very talented writer. And I very much enjoyed "What's in a Name?" in Paul Cookson's recent Dinosaur Poems anthology. (My own two in that collection are my first to be published on your side of the pond.) 

Eric Ode  - See Eric's site here for poems and lesson plans www.ericode.com

Hi Andrea,

May I first say how impressed I was reading through the different sections on your site and I especially liked your poems. I have written a few for children aged between 7 and 12 (at a guess). Sometimes younger children understand more than we credit them for!

Chris Radford

Dear Ms. Shavick,

I would like to use your poem "Dumbo" in a lesson on scansion. I am a future teacher and this lesson is to be "taught" to my peers for my Direct Instruction practice lesson. I wanted a funny poem about teachers because I am trying to tie the lesson into "real life" and since we are going to (hopefully) be teachers, I thought it was perfect! My school is Gonzaga University and it is in Spokane, Washington.

Thank you for your funny limerick!  Stacci McIntyre

NAME: amy louise jarvis

i think that the one with the lice in the teachers hair is the best because i think it is funny so i think that is the best, i also like the one with the girl who saves the world then gets in to detention because it is funny how she gets into detention so i also like that one to !!!!!

NAME: merry mahary

hi first i would like to say that your poems are really wondrefull and i really like them very much and i read them always.  to tell you my name is merry mahary i am years old .i am the student of finnish mission school and i an grade nine . my country name is ERITREA with it's capital city ASMARA. and as my wish i wanna to be a famus poem and book writer

Hi! For my English homework I have to write a poem anthology(I go to Hayes Secondary school, that's in Bromley), I have to put some of my favourite poems in it, and I really like: Grandma was eaten by a Shark! and predictable, so please may I use them in my anthology, yours sincerely, Katie Wells

NAME: Ann

My teacher always tells us to bring in a poem on friday, and tomorrow is friday the thirteenth, so she said we should bring in a poem about superstitions. Can i use yours??

NAME: Nicola Webb

Please can I use "School Report" Poem in my newsletter which goes out to children in Singapore?

NAME: Michelle Marroquin

Yuor poems are really cool and very interisting to me and my parents like them to so I hope you write some more NEW poems soon Well good bye!!!

NAME: Brianna Gentile

I would like to copy this in my one only book for ace. There will only be one book made. My book is called "My Favorite Poems" I go to West Carroll Elementary School. Jackson US

My name is Jackie and I would like to use your poem advent horizon for one of my lesson that i will be teaching. I go to the Unviersity of texas at san antonio and i am in the process of getting certified as a teacher. I need to teach lessons and I would like to use your poem to accompany my lesson. Thanks Jackie

NAME: pete

Ive just read your tips for getting published. They're excellent! Thanks very much. Thanks for doing that for people like me.

NAME: Tasha

What the hell are the publisher's problem? They sound like their on a total power trip? who the hell do they think they are? (unless your exagerating) do they actually accept any book? or are you trying to put people off writing?

I'm not trying to put people off writing, just being honest. No publisher is on a power trip - they just want to make money, like all businesses. And why not - if there were no publishers there would be no books.

NAME: Scott Chambers

Dear Andrea, I have just finished reading your "get published" page, and just thought I would drop you a little note to let you know that somebody out there appreciates the time that you have taken to help others. I have found myself with some spare time on my hands at the moment and have always wanted to write. Just never managed to get around to it. I am now considering finally buckling down and having a go during my new found freedom. I found your comments useful given my complete and utter inexperience!

Thanks again for helping us all.  Scott

NAME: ruzeb

I liked the poem "PREDICTABLE" because it says alot of funny things  my school is P.S.149 THE CHRISTA MACAULLIFFE SCHOOL in NEW YORK CITY

sincerly,  RUZEB CHOWDHURY   

P.S. PLEASE REPLY!!!....

I did - I always do!

Dear Andrea

Thank you for your very practical guide to publishing. There is one thing I need to know but cannot find any information on and that is: does one have to put the name of the printer on the verso page?

Yours sincerely

Alison Orchard

only if you are self-publishing, otherwise it will be done for you

NAME: Heidi Norweg

Thanks, Andrea. Your page was very helpful. I am just at the stage of trying to find someone who can make a book dummy for me. I haven't even gotten to the rejections part of the cycle, yet.

hi my name is katrina,

I live in Adelaide,South Australia,Australia. I go to Stradbroke Primary School and I am 12 and in year 7.

I am envolved with a Speech and Drama group at my school. I am working on grade 5 advanced Speech and Drama and I like ur poem:Advent Horizon and I am asking for ur permission to possibly use this poem for an Estedford and an exam.   Iam looking forward to your reply thanks


NAME: TA-Nisha

Whats up i like the poems alot they mad me feel alot better about alot of everything in my life thank you so much..........   Love,Ta-nisha

NAME: Christina Pratt

Hi, im currently doing my teacher training at Edge Hill in Ormskirk, UK. Our current subject in school is poetry on certain themes, our first theme is school. If possible i would like the pupils to look on your website and find their favourite poem about school. They would then copy the poem, write their own sentence about why they liked the poem and then decorate it to go in our class anthology. We will hopefully be taking poems from a variety of different sources, using your website would allow the children to use I.T aswell. The anthology would not be getting published, it would just be a resource we would use in our classroom. Would this be ok for us to use one or more of your poems?

Thank you very much  Christina 

NAME: Kelsea

I go to a middle school in Ohio, and was wondering if I can use a couple of your poems called: School Report, Predictable, and Miss Picky for my poetry book in my class. I will put that you wrote them.If you do let me thanks and if you don't it is ok because i no how it feels to write poems and you don't want anybody else to no it.

sincerely Kelsea

NAME: Mariss Cooper

hi andera,

i love your poems they are really cool, i really like that one about the boy and his brother, who punch each other trhen play thoses funny games after wooooooooo so cool keep up the good work tatata luv from rissa-aged 12-sydeny nsw

NAME: dani climpson

hey, i really love the poems about school replort and miss picky they are funny, from dani P.s good luck 4 the furture

NAME: ellie ward

hi, my name is Ellie and i live in harrogate. I am auditioning for a school play and i thought that your poems are suitable for this matter. I was hoping on using 'predictable' or 'dumbo' thanks

Hello. My name is Joany Mc Donald and I'm from Ballinrobe Community school Co Mayo Ireland.My class are doing a school magazine and we would really like to use your poem "School Report" in our magazine as we really enjoyed reading it and would really like to share it with all the students and parents that will hopefully buy our magazine.

please reply, and thankyou for your time, Joany & Classmates.

NAME: Saachi Sharma

Hi Andrea how are you I am from West Lodge F&M I just wanted to say thatwhen you came to my school I think you did really well and I really love your poems especially Miss Picky.

NAME: Eileen

Dear Andrea,

I would like permission to use two of your poems, "Predictable" and "Miss Picky" for a parent's meeting at our school next week, in Athenry, Co. Galway, Ireland.

Greetings!

Our Book Club for First and Second Graders is thinking about growing up! Next month, we'll be reading One Morning in Maine (McCloskey) and You'll Grow Soon, Alex.

Do you have any advice you can share on the topic or, even memories you have of being 6 or 7?Thanks in advance! We love your books!

Kathleen
First and Second Grade Book Club
Walpole Public Library MA USA

Hello,

I just wanted to say that I found your article inspirational. I have lots of ideas for childrens books and more recently picture books (mostly while daydreaming at my desk) but have lacked direction for these ideas. I now have a plan:

1) Start writing ALL of my ideas down
2) Buy the Year book
3) Start sending out my ideas
Thanks for writing your guide, I really like the honesty and brief step-by-step approach that you have adopted. There is a lot of good karma coming your way!

Sarah - in Upnor, Kent

Sarah is referring to my Get Published page here

Hi Andrea,

I have been thinking about trying to write for children for a wee while now. My own children are 7,5 and 3 and like me love their stories. They've all endured mummy's made-up characters and tall tales. I'm also a librarian and so am very familiar with what's on offer to children just now. I would love to issue one of my own books to our young readers! I guess I just need the push to sit down and put pen to paper and I found your advice on getting published refreshingly honest and indeed inspiring.

Thanks again for the no-nonsense info.  

Nicola.    P.S. 'You'll soon grow Alex' is sitting in my son's bookcase and has been enjoyed many times!

Dear Andrea,

I came across your publishing advice whilst looking for websites relating to my daughter's reading scheme. Thanks so much for down to earth advice and humour...we live in South Africa (where thankfully most people appreciate the British sense of humour)and I'm looking to send a first manuscript off (it is in the filing cabinet!!!)  P.S. I love the bit about birthday candles,my daughter's friend went up in flames, thankfully no serious injury thanks to a quick thinking teacher and they DO still allow birthday candles in schools here!!
Katherine Dodd

NAME: anna Dawson

I love your poems on amazing people, superstitions and gruesome and grizzly poems and would like to read some to the children I teach at Mount House School Tavistock.

Hi Andrea,

A great site, well done. I will be coming back to your site for tips again. Kind regards.

Gareth Thomas

Your advice is great and you are a terrific writer! Thank you for the information. I am considering writing teaching-related materials, not for children. More for other teachers and for parents. Good luck to you in your future endeavors!

Sherry Brown, Oxford

 

Dear Andrea

Please may I use either Advent Horizon or How to Successfully Persuade Your Parents to Give You More Pocket Money to learn for my speech and drama exam? I hope I may because they are very funny.

Thank you  Jacob Newton

 

Dear Andrea

Many thanks for your fabulous advice, I greatly appreciated everything you said. Debbie Barton

Hello there, thank you so much ive really learned alot from reading all the advice and ideas you've given on this site. I'm at the moment TRYING to continue with an idea fo a childrens book. Anyway thank you again for an interesting afternoon , and i really mean that too!!  Kindest regards Jacky King

Dear Andrea.

I thoroughly enjoyed your information on tips getting published. Andrew Reid

Dear Andrea

What a great website. 
I recently had an idea for a picture book and I couldn't shake it off. With my job I spend long lonely hours in the car and this little story just kept popping up on a regular basis. I decided to write it down - if only to stop it rattling around my brain! I then thought about having it published so that other people could enjoy it. However, I have never done anything remotely like this before and looked to the internet for some guidance.

Your website has been so informative. I bought the book you suggested from Amazon and I am currently reading through that. Shortly, I am going to start sending my manuscript off. It may come to nothing but then again it may be taken up.......... who knows, you can but try.

You have given me very useful information on how to go about sending the manuscript off to publishers. So thank you and I will let you know if anything happens.

Regards, Sarah Phillips, Swansea

My 10 year old son Matthew has been given a poetry reading assignment at school. He chose your "Advent Horizon" poem to read to his class. I would therefore like to ask for permission for him to read this poem. Matthew is an avid Stargate and Star Trek (when it was on the past couple of years) viewer so this poem is very near and dear to his heart. Thanks, Becky Tutto, Indiana

Hey Andrea

Thanks so much for your tips on getting published, I have a few pieces sitting in my computer that i will be sending in!!

Cat

TO ANDREA;thank you for allowing teens from all over the world to express themselves the way they do. THANK you for allowing others to have their dreams of becoming a poet come true! I wish YOU a happy year and a GOD bless you! MAY you continue doing so and beyond! I for one am eternally grateful!  Ashley

NAME: michelle chamberlain

All these poems on here are fab . they portray the feeling of millions of teen feelings across the worls wickedly. I write poems my self an u would be surprised how similar but uniqe we all are .

big up's to u all .

Keep writig!!! xxx

Dear Andrea, 

I have just found 'Psychometric Tests for Graduates' to be very useful, thank you. Am off to by the practice book now!    Many thanks,  

Thomas Kingston

Dear Andrea,

Very enlightening article on how to get published. I read it out loud to my 13-year-old. She is an avid writer and illustrator. These were great tips. Thanks so much.

Ann Wilber 

Lawrenceville, NJ    USA

NAME: Nicole M

I like your poems very much, and would like you to continue writing these poems. I've always wanted to be a poet.  Merry Christmas Andrea.

Hi, I just want to say that this site has inspired me in many ways. I'm just a teenager but I've been writing poems and short stories for quite a while and this site has helped me to discover the deeper meaning of what I'm writing or reading. Anne Fiore's poem "Sqeeze My Hand Twice" is my favorite because I can relate to it. Thanks Andrea for creating this site.

-Hailee, Houston, TX

I have to read poems that have been published for UIL Poetry reading - I would like to use Lucky Escape, Things I did for Luck and HOW TO SUCCESSFULLY PERSUADE YOUR PARENTS TO GIVE YOU MORE POCKET MONEY. They cannot be read straight from the book, but just from a plain sheet of paper. Sorry for the late notice, but the reading is tomorrow. Will it be alright to use them? Thanks - Bailey Jones

NAME: Katelyn

I would like to use Miss Picky for poem reading contest on Thursday, Dec. 1st. I am in the 5th grade. My school is Valley Mills Elementary  tx. USA

NAME: Mia Angelique F.

I really liked Miss Picky and Miss Nits they made me laugh. You're a fabuous writer

NAME: shelly

i think think that henrita the bat is realy funny and my friend matt told me that poem on the bus and i forgot to ask him what website did he get it from and i was looking at heaps of sites then i got to this and found the poem henrita the bat and i was very happy. i think your poems are great.

NAME: Lynne Holden

Time to Get Out

Please could my 7 year old daughter use this poem for her literacy homework at St. Patrick's RC School in Birmingham England. The class is just starting to learn about poems. Thank you very much

NAME: Claire Waghorn

Dear Andrea,

I'm a drama teacher looking for a few space poems as stimuli. May i use yours in my lesson please

Thanks  Claire

I thought Miss Nits was funny and also School Report Channing London

NAME: HANA MOLONEY

Please can i read your poem "predictable" to my class next week as my home work is to find a poem to share with my friends. My school is Stone Cross Primary in east sussex. I really like this poem because it is like my mum. Thank you!

Hi Andrea, my name is Liz and I go to Eastwood Public School in NSW Australia.I am in year 6, and for homework we have to find a poem about school or homework, and copy it into our spelling books. I was wondering whether I could use one of your school poems.

NAME: Hannah Thorne

I would like to use the poem "Miss Nits" for my homework. I attend Emmbrook Junior School, Wokingham, Berkshire and I am in year 5. For my homework I have to copy the poem into my homework book and answer questions on it like, What it is about, does it rhyme and did I enjoy it. I hope very much too use your poem as it was very good.

NAME: piglet

TO all the awsome poets,i sincerely wish you good luck to your bright future! KEEP your head up, continue to bless GOD!

NAME: Lucy Brooker

Hi Andrea

I've just read all your tips on writing children's books and now feel quite deflated. As a complete amateur I never realised it there was so much to think about. I am a young(ish) mother of two (3 year old and 14 months). My husband and I made up a character to teach our 3 year old son about the consequences of being naughty, not brushing teeth, running out into the road etc which proved very effective and fun at the same time. He does love them and so do cousins, friends etc. I am a Graphic designer and work closely with an illustrator and I am seriously thinking about developing this idea into picture books for 3 - 5 year olds. However, since reading your tips, I am thinking Oh my goodness! Am I just another unrealistic parent who think they can get a book published or is it worth putting in some real effort. I would appreciate your view. Kind regards

lots of tips for writers on the Get Published page. I wish there was an easy answer....but you never know

NAME: Jasmine

At school i need to read out a poem for homework and i really liked Miss Picky and i think that my teacher would find it funny to. Please may i read it out in class.

Hi I'm Catherine

I was just wondering if I could use the Poem'Miss Picky' and ' Miss Nits' for some english work at Rugby School. We have to find a poem about schools and I thought these ones were great.

Please may I use your poem Watch Out as part of my school project on Mars and Jupiter for this halfterm. My school is St. Margaret Clitherow  Kent, England

Thank you   Alice

NAME: Amanda

My daughter has been asked to take a poem into school as her class are putting together a class anthology of poems,linked to the curent work unit on poetry. She would like to take in Grandma was eaten by a Shark and Predictable. She really enjoyed them. The children will be sharing their poems and discussing what they particularly enjoy about them.

School- Sprowston First School, Norwich, England.

NAME: Silla

Hello Andrea, really loved your space poems and wanted to ask if it was ok for my children to take them into school to buddy read with the younger children. We are celebrating Nat Poetry Day, actually we are having a whole week of activities and buddy reading is one of them. We are a little behind the UK as school is closed on Thursday and Friday (its our weekend!). We are based in Dubai, our school is called Dubai English Speaking School and I am sure the children will really enjoy your poems. Hope it's ok, kind regards, Silla

NAME: Sean 

I am 9 years old and I am doing a project on space for school. I am in Griffithstown Junior School. I hope it is okay to use two of your poems that I like lots in my project. I like Advent Horizon & Black Holes

Thank you   Sean

NAME: Ashleigh Louderback

Hi, In school we are learning about the Middle Ages and we've got to dress up as a merchant, queen, king, peasant, ect....We also have to perform a medieval talent but if we can't then we have to read a medieval poem. The King who invented tax is a good one for this occasion and I was wondering if I could read it to my class and some of their parents tomorrow. Cincinnati,Ohio, USA, Sycamore Junior High

I was wondering if you could email me back very soon because this thing is tomorrow, and I leave for the bus at 7:00am and thats in like seven hours and twenty minutes. thanks

Hi, my name is silvina and I attend Miami Senior High School, . My teacher asked the class to give her 10 quotes and 2 poems based on teachers, students, learning, education, and/or school.

I was searching through the internet and I found this website and I came upon one of your poems: CROSS COUNTRY. I thought it was pretty funny and was wondering if I could use it (copy it) for that class, I just want to use that poem for my class.

My name is Jennah Rose Criner and I live in Winnsboro, TX . I have been writing novels and poetry for years, ever since I could write. I am very wary about sending in my novels and quite honestly, I dunno how to go about it. But I really, genuinly love to write and I think that I have been given a gift and I want to share it with others. If there is any way that you can help me, please do so. Thank you for your time. Sincerely, Jennah Rose.

NAME: chintan Vora

Please Andrea Shavick coul i use poems miss Picky and the cross country. I go to Q.E school In Barnet Thank You

NAME: Christine Carney

I would like to use some of the space poems on National Poetry Day in school (King Ecgbert School, Sheffield

NAME: E Reynolds

Just discovered your website and love it. Would like to reproduce a few poems for my classroom wall - especially tjhose about school. I work in Learning Support and think some of these poems would inspire staff and pupils alike. Please let me know. Thanks

NAME: Veronica

I love your poem "Predictable." My boy just started school this fall and well, it's hard when you first send your baby to school! I wondered and wondered all day long on his first day what he was doing, when he came home he didn't remember! And just about every day I go through the same questions and always get the don't remember response! I'm glad to know that I am not the only one! :)

NAME: Roxanne Norman

HEY!!! My name Roxanne from Cape Town, South Africa. Ive been looking for a site like this forever... I LOVE IT!!   Can't wait to submit some of my own stuff.

ANNE FIORE-- I lOVE YOUR POEMS!!!

NAME: Erica Smith

I would like to use some of your poems about school for my Literacy lesson on poems on a similar theme. I hope this would be acceptable.    Thanks Erica

NAME: Rachel Pryke

What a fantastically helpful site on getting published, thankyou. All my queries about trying to find an illustrator were answered - although the pc bit makes my prospective story unlikely to get very far!

I'll have a re-think before submitting...   Rachel

NAME: nimisha chavda

Dear Andrea,  Do send me the details about your book.."Passing Psychometric tests" since I would like to purchase a copy of the book.I am an Indian & reside in Mumbai.

Warm regards, Nimisha

If you don't live in the UK then try www.amazon.co.uk who stock all my books and will reliably post worldwide.

NAME: Leanne.05

Hiah    I've just started a new school. It's at Hungerhill in Doncaster.

My homework is to find some pieces of poetry, and I've looked all over but they are too long, and yours are perfect.  I would like to use some poems about School from your site (so I can do some very good homework!) and I wondered if you would let me.

My school is Wimbledon Chase Primary School of Merton Hall Road, Wimbledon. Please do not contact them as it is a suprise for them of me collecting loads of poems for our history. I LOVE your poems and desperatly want them for my collection. I will not sign them under my own name.

PLEASE PLAESE PLLLLLLLEASE!!!   Rhianna

NAME: Samantha Renshaw

Hey there Andrea. As i was reading the poems posted on your site, i noticed something very upsetting. I took notice that 3/4 of them are sad stories about how they feel that they are outcasts of the world, being overshadowed by the people who they believe to be of "greater importance". I do feel great sympathy for those who deal with those issues but i feel that for every negative there is at least a positive as well. My advise: include poems that inspire young teens and assure them that they are not alone in the world. And if you decide to display thgis on your site this is my advise for all of those teens who wrote those poems: STAY POSITIVE! Life will reward you in the end. Ohhhh yeah, I attend Burlington City High School in Burlington New Jersey USA.

NAME: Jayne Jordan

Hi Andrea  I was just reading the poetry on your site and just had to write to say that 'predictable' could have been written by me and i suppose a hundred and one other Moms.

I wonder if any kids ever tell their Moms how their day really went. Thanks for making me and my youngest son smile today.  great poem's   JJ

NAME: Stephanie Gebhard

School Report and Miss Picky are neat poems I may like to use when writing a play for Kindergarten through fifth graders for our Coupeville Elementary School Drama Club that I am the advisor of. I am looking for poems about the difference between an engaging teacher that uses the arts and one who just lectures up front. My play is called "Through the Cracks". Can I use these poems if they work out?

NAME: Hannah McElroy

Dear Andrea Shavick,

I am writing this letter to thank you as your website really helped me with my homework. Hannah McElroy

Hi Andrea,

My son, Louis Benson, is taking part on a public speaking competition at his school (Cumnor House School, Croydon, England) in two weeks time. He would like your permission to read one of your poems, 'Graham,Who Was Always Late On Purpose, And Lost His Head', which he loved.

Many thanks, Clara Benson.

NAME: Matt Dexter

i liked miss picky     -matt

NAME: Hilary Cook

Love your poems Andrea. I am teaching poetry to a Year 4/5 class in South Australia, and would like your permission to use your poem : Auntie Ethel the ExtraTerrestrial with them.

NAME: Emily Brock

Dear Andrea Shavick,

I would like to include your poem 'Cross Country' in my year nine english assignment on poetry about school. I go to Ferny Grove State High School in Brisbane, Australia. I have to discuss why i liked the poem, and also its subject matter, theme and mood. The assignment is to be handed in on the 18 August 2005. If it is alright that I use the poem would you please let me know or something, I'm not sure what you usually do. Thankyou very much.

NAME: Rachelle

I ALREADY COPIED A POEM BUT I DIDN'T READ THE BOTTOM OF THE PAGE I'M REALLY SORRY.PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!!!!!!!!!!.

SCHOOL:WILLIAM H. TURNER TECH ARTS HIGH SCHOOL TOWN:NORTH MIAMI CITY

NAME: Jacob Lewarne

Victoria C of E first school Berkhamsted Herts

Jacob is 9 and would like to read Predictable in the Year 4 Leavers assembly this week please

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i think think that henrita the bat is realy funny and my friend matt told me that poem on the bus and i forgot to ask him what website did he get it from and i was looking at heaps of sites then i got to this and found the poem henrita the bat and i was very happy. i think your poems are great. Shelly

My school is Wimbledon Chase Primary School of Merton Hall Road, Wimbledon. Please do not contact them as it is a suprise for them of me collecting loads of poems for our history. I LOVE your poems and desperatly want them for my collection. I will not sign them under my own name.

PLEASE PLAESE PLLLLLLLEASE!!!     Rhianna

Country: Canada
I am a grade 10 student and doing a presentation on superstitions. I would like to read out some of your superstition poem to my class. Mehrnaz

i would like to use the "advent horizons" and "black holes" poem in im grade 6 classroom. i will use these examples of space poety to get them thinking and generating ideas.
they will eventually be creating their own space poetry 
Renee - Mudgeeraba State School, Gold coast australiai

NAME: john travolta
EMAIL:

these poems SUCK!! I HATE THEM BYE

hiya everyone. my name is lauren stapleton aswell.how freaky huh!? neways i just wnated to say tht i loove ur site.it makes me dribble. ohh wow its sooo inspiring.please will you make another one. i am in 10th grade at hipperholme and lightcliffe.

hello, my name is elis and i would like to print out one of your poems if this is okay please say so i am 12.

Dear Andrea I was wondering if I could use your poem titled School Report for an english assignment, My school name is Heathfield High School, South Australia 
Yours Kindly,
Dennis Andreasen.

i would like to use one of your poems on school for a class assignment and if it is alright i like to use it.
Erin

NAME: Karen
Hi, I am creating a supplemental unit for my second grade curriculum on Space. I would like to be able to use many of them to read and especially show my students the patterns of Watch Out!, Watching, and Black Holes.

I teach at School Lane Charter School in Bensalem, PA, USA. Thank you,  Karen

NAME: Antonella
i'm in the 5th garde is it okay to use one of your poems for my class report i want the peoms to be good so i just knew i had to your site

NAME: Ashley Snyder

Dear Andrea
I loved your poems! I used them for a great presentation in my Child Development class! My teacher loved them and thought they were great! I would love to hear back from you soon! E-mail me if you would like!
Thanks!    Ashley Snyder

NAME: Marie-Angela Ayimamitis

I am currently teaching poetry to year 8 at Hayesfield school in Bath and came across your poems. As it is Friday 13th soon I thought it would be a good idea to show my pupils your superstition poems. I'm sure they will ejoy them! Hope this is okay.  Many thanks,  Marie

NAME: emile
hi look my name is emile i live in lebanon beyrouth i am in the "sagesse" school i just want to tell you that you're poems are great and i most liked the one about "my teacher is not very nice herhair is infested with lice when my mother complained the headmaster explained she was all he could get for the price" that was cool    bye!

NAME: tannaz kani
hi i like miss nits my school is called ryfield pimary in hillingdon it is in town your poems are very funny

Hi! At my school we're studing poems and we were supposed to bring in a poem we like. Do you mind If I bring one of you're poems? Don't worry I'll tell the teacher I printed it off you're site.
Lisa,   Highland Oaks, Los Angeles

Your poems are total crap, get a life asshole!  Mat Bent

LOL.  No one can accuse me of ditching the bad reviews! But now read what Amy Mason said...

I wanted to tell you that I like the poems that you write. I think they are very funny, and I much prefer the poems that you write to all the other poem books we have at school. Thank you for reading my letter, and please email me back.- Amy Mason age 8 from Southborne, UK

I mentioned your name and the kids loved your poems and wrote some great ones of their own.
Thanks again
     Kate

NAME: Chasity Bopp
EMAIL: ems_hottie_2004@yahoo.com

i liked the miss picky poem! its was great!! i am in the 8th great... i am in 8th grade and we are learnong about poems and i loved writing poems..and i also love to read them...

I am 9 yrs old and doing a project at school on the solar system. I would like to include 2 of your poems please. ( Watch Out and Black Holes ).
My school is Knightswood Primary School, Glasgow Scotland, UK
I will include your name in the thank you page of my project.
thank you,
Shauma Mohapatra

I am a teacher from Brenzett School, Kent and am struggling to find space poems.
Could I use Watching, Watch Out and Black Holes please? I need some space poems to show my class next week.
Julie Pout

Dear Andrea,
Your book of "You'll Grow Soon Alex" was a really good book. It teaches you how to not care about what you look like in the outside, it matters if you grow in the inside. I'm a short one myself! I am about 51 inches and I am in the fourth grade! Sometimes people call me shorty. But I don't really mind. I am short, but those people in the inside are really tiny people. Those people who call me shorty are right. I am short I admit it. But I am always going to be a skyscraper in the inside.
Anyway, I have some qustions about the book. Why was Alex so short? Is it true that if you eat a lot of protein that you'll grow? Jazmin G.
P.S. Is there any more ways to get taller?

I wish I knew - I'm also quite short!

hi andrea im Evelyn for a long time ive been readind your paems and i really like them ! i write alot of poems depending on the mood im in but ive never published any of them i havnet told my parents either well i was just wondering how u stared your own web site later

NAME: khleo thomas


sup i just wanted to say your a good writer my little brother khameel likes your The Best Pet book and your Grandma Got Eaten By a Shark book of poems
Kleo Thomas strikes again!

Dear Mis.Shavick,

I read your book "You'll Grow Soon Alex." It's really good! Funny too!
I'm tall except my head doesn't hit the ceiling. Please reply soon!!!
Brittany

Dear Mrs. Shavick,
I loved your book "You'll Grow Soon Alex"! Even though I'm like the tallest person in my class, I'm always trying to grow taller, even though the kid in the story didn't grow any taller. Anyway, I had some questions about your book, and one of them was; Can yo really grow taller by drinking milk???
Haley
Milk has a lot of protein but it probably won't make you any taller than you would be if you didn't drink it.

Hi, I'm a teacher at Caistor Primary school near Lincoln, England. We are having a 'space day' on wednesday.  I've been looking on the net for some poems to use with the children at the beginning of the session and found yours. I'd love to use your poems in my Literacy lesson.
Many Thanks, Katie

hi, i am currently preparing for my english a-level. we are doing research on 'space' in our group to gather lots of infomation from different areas, mine is poetry. i would be very gratful if i could use Auntie ethel the extraterrestrial, advent horizon and black holes. i live near nottingham, in the east midlands, england. thank you for your time. Joanna Hindson.

I am a student teacher from wales and would like to use the poem grandma was eaten by a shark with my KS1 class. I am emailing to ask your permission.

Many thanks
Amy carr

Dear Andrea,

I am a 11 year-old-girl. In my challenge class(kids who have a high rank)we are making a magazine. We have to write peoms,make recipes and other stuff.I decided to do some of your poems. So I am wondering can I get your permission to put your poems in my book. Ohh!!This book will not be published so you want have to worry about anything.

Sincerlly,Hayshe Boo
P.S. I love your poem SCHOOL POEM!!That is so funny.
Oh to other poems I like but they are not by you are STAR CHILD & THE PAIN.
They are really good but not as good as yours!!!

you have incredebly funny poems and i likr them allot i go to school at buckingham primary school   Kai

hi ...i am doing a a poem book and included in it there are my own poems a section of my favorite poems i would like it if i can use poems on this website in the favorite poems section of my book

thanks for listening
Jen

I just wanted to tell you, that your site is wonderful, today was not a great day for me, and I got online to find some poems, you made me smile, and for that I just wanted to say thanks.  Ashley

Hi I'm a student of Woodlands Secondary School from Singapore... I copied some of your poems about school...The titles are, Predictable and also Miss Picky.... I copied it as I needed them for my Literature project which is about searching poems about school and presenting it to the school on the dateline..... I hope you understand.... Thanks and your poems are really terrific and excellent.....

P.S: You are my idol when it comes to poems...

Yours Truly
Rozlyafirdawatie Rozli
Singapore

Hi
Our class is doing a newsletter and we need to do poems in them. I would like to use yours as they are very intresting and are relevant to the topic. I would like to use the poems 'miss picky' and 'predictable'. I would say who wrote them so plese can i use your poems    Lana

I have found two favourite poems, Predictable and Mrs Nits. With your permission I would like to use them in our new school newspaper next week.

Emily O'Donnell, St Oswald's Junior School, Guiseley, UK

Hello Ms. Shavick,
I was wondering if I would be allowed to use your poem "Predictable" for a project for school. It is a project with what I consider great literature, but it will not be published. In order to give you full credit, could you send some information about yourself, like where you were born ect. Thanks for your help.

Katie Jarrels
Spotswood High School
Penn Laird, Virginia

heyy my names xavier

i just wanted to use one of ur poemsvfor an english assigment on changing perspectiv is that ok. it was a great poem and is very handy for wat im doing

Dear Ms Shavick

My son, Finn (aged 8), has a poetry week at school next week. All children have been asked to recite a poem and we think your poem "Predictable" is fantastic and perfect for an 8 year old to learn and recite in front of the whole school - quite a test of his nerves! We'd be really grateful if you allowed us to use your poem and we will, of course, tell everyone where we found it. Finn is at Brookham School in Hampshire.

Many thanks and we look forward to hearing from you.
Tracey Campbell

Hi i am doing a assignment and i was wondering if i can use Miss Nits well thank u if u let me.

KInd Regards
Maretta Marriott 13 years of age!!!

Please can I use Miss Picky for my school homework? My teacher wants us to find a poem by a famous author.

Your poetry is really SUPER. I wish I could write poetry as good as you. I am 8 years old and I am going to be 9 soon.
Thank you
Sophie O’Connor, from Wirral UK

Dear Andrea,

I would like to say how much I enjoyed reading your work on the website, particularly the poem 'Cross Country', that brought back a number of memories.

Lee Gower, Grimsby, UK

My son's class (Banff Primary, Aberdeenshire) are doing a themed assembly about light and dark.
We have been asked to find a funny poem about aliens to read out as part of the short presentation.
Would it be OK to use your poem 'Watch Out'?
Carol Irvine

hi, i am stephanie i am 12 years old and love your poems, i realy like your poem called "miss picky". In my english class we have to do a talk on a poem we liked, and aboute the auther, so i chose you. i would really like some info about you such as where you were born? when you were born and maybie some stuff about you poems and how many you did? please email back before 15th of febuary

I have had so many teachers exactly like in you poem.."Mrs. Picky"..its soo true and funnny...my sn on aim is beachisparadise2..if u wanna chat..good job on the poem..later

Alexis, San Clemente High School 

Dear Andrea,
I was wondering if I could use your poem "Grandma was eaten by a shark" for a poetry file I am collecting. I am a junior at Valley Forge Christian College located in Phoenixville, PA in the U.S. I would love to use your poem to incorporate in one of my lesson plans for my Creative Arts in the Elementary School class. Have a wonderful day!
:) Lauren Tweedy

Dear Andrea,
I am a high school teacher in Australia. I have been looking at your poems on the website and wondered if I may use some of them with my class? We are studying a unit on The Unnatural, Unnerving and Unexplained. I would like to use some of your poems to stimulate the students thinking and possibly to help them write some of their own. many thanks for considering my request
Hiria Reppion
Melrose High School

Would like to use "Time to get out" poem as input for Literacy in my Reception Class at Muscliff Primary School as I think the children will find it easy to relate to and help them to discuss home life. Cheers. Ann Hadlow

Hey Andrea,

My name is Fergus im 11 and I go to school named Shatin College in Hong Kong and ive been reading your poems on the website and i thought they were FAB!! I particullarly like the School Report Poem because tihs poem is really fit for me because im a bit of a trouble maker but all the trouble has stopped now. I was wondering if i could borrow that poem and also can You come to Hong Kong and visit my school some time this year i would really apreciate it!

Thanks!  Best Regards,
Fergus Heathcote

Hello Ms. Shavick,

I just read and interview done with you on the Word Pool. I really enjoyed what you had to say. I definitely concur with your thoughts on inspritation for writing children's books, the length it takes to write them, and revisions. I'm about to re-read one of my books to my wife and son before submitting it to Robin Wade for his consideration. Actually, I'll be sending him two mss. While I read to my family, I'll be revising some more, no doubt.

God bless you in your endeavors and future writing,

Brian Humek
Irving, TX

I like your poem Advent Horizon.
Would it be OK if I read it out in my school assembly please? We are doing space as our theme. I will say it's by you.   Thanks   Billie

Andrea,

Hello! Greetings from the Land of Morning Calm (South Korea). My name is Brett Clayton I am an EFL teacher working for the Incheon City Board of Education. I am currently drafting a curriculum for my school and would love to use a couple of your poems as material for an intonation lesson. The material is to be published only for students of our program. The poems I've selected are "Watching" and "Predictable". Would this be acceptable?

Take care, Brett Clayton

hi i would like to use the poem Grandma got eaten by a shark
and how brafe are you?
 Celynne   Miami Florida

Andrea, is the advent horizon poem from your hand?
As a hobby I'm making music and right now i'm making a space cd, for which we used this poem. Who can we mention as the author? maybe it is also nice to receive the result within 1/2 months.

Greeting Pieter from Holland

Hi, I am a Year 5 teacher at Auriol Junior School in Surrey and would very much like to use some of your space poems as part of our Literacy lessons. We are doing the over arching topic of 'Earth and Beyond' in Science, Geography, History and Art. We are trying to link our Literacy plan in as well and I am short of some poems about Space. If there is no fee. I intend to use them for the children to read and comprehend.
Many Thanks
Kirsty

Me and my friend really like your poems. We will probably only use one or two.
webster Middle School&Marina del Ray Middle School
Heather & Masha, Los Angeles, United States

NAME: Kay Wood
Montgomeryshire Citizen Advocacy
Newtown
Powys SY16 2EH

Our organisation partners volunteer advocates with adults with a learning disability who have difficulties communicating their needs and wishes. We submit a quarterly newsletter to all our volunteer advocates and people with learning disabilities (readership = 60 people). The newsletter needs to be 'user friendly' and we try and include articles that can be enjoyed by all readers.

I was looking for a short poem that could be enjoyed by everyone and found AUNTY BETTY THINK SHE'S BATGIRL. I think it is absolutely wonderful and I am sure the readers of our newsletter would thoroughly enjoy it.  I do hope you grant permission for us to us it.

I was given a copy of' Stop, Elephant, Stop! as a present for my baby Thea, and she absolutely LOVES it. I’ve read it to her over and over again ……..she can’t get enough of it.

Alison Scaddan

NAME: Cameron Smith Aged 9

My english teacher has asked us to learn a poem.  My mum and I thought it would be funny to learn your Miss Nits poem.  I go to Wessex Junior School in Maidenhead, Berkshire.  I hope it will be alright to use your poem.

dear Andrea,

I chose your poem "un-stable auntie" as my poem for the good speaking competition we have at school. We all had to learn a poem and then 8 people out of every year group of 90 pupils were chosen for the final.I got in the final and came 2nd in my year and in the top 10 out of 400 children in the whole school . I got a big laugh at the end ! Thank you for sharing your poems on the internet.

Joseph Seddon age 7.
well done Joseph!

Hi could I use Advent horizon,watching,AUNTIE ETHEL THE EXTRATERRESTRIAL,WATCH OUT!,BLACK HOLES.
And that is all.
please let me used them cause its an project.


 phi hoang,  Calamvale community colledge/brisbane/australia

NAME: Mrs Ruth Boud

I am a Reception teacher at Bedonwell Infant School, Belvedere, Kent. We are celebrating the recent poetry day by sending home poems for the children to learn over the half term holiday to recite as part of a whole school assembly. I am thinking of using your poem "Time to get out" with my class of 4 & 5 year olds.

what a lovely idea

NAME: Nicole Halbur

Hi - For my English project, we are suppose to read a poem by an author that you like. I would like to use Black Holes to read to the class. Could you give me permission to read it to the class and use it?

Ogden High School, Ogden, Ia Sincerely, Nikki

NAME: 

can i use a poem for home work

NAME: Sara Al-Hussaini

My favourite poem was called Miss Picky because it made me laugh.
Good luck with the rest of them u r great.
from sara - West Lodge Middle School, North Harrow, london, england, the world!

NAME: Lucy Harris

hi, i was wondering if i could use any one of your poems for an essay i have to write on home schooling?
lucy sevenoaks school sevenoaks

NAME: Sean Smith

Poem "PREDICTABLE"

I would like to recite this poem at my school tomorrow, 7th October 2004, as part of National Poetry Day.
Thank you  Sean Smith

I'm doing a school project, a poem anthologie, and my topic is space. I really liked your poems and was hoping I could use some of them in my presentation. 
John Moore, Aged 15.
Belle River, Ontario (Canada).

i really like ur poems!! great      GINA

hi from hilal
from east brook elementary, brooks alberta canada

Hey,
I am wondering if I could read the poem 'Cross Country' to my class. Thanks.
Jame Lee

For anyone else who reads this poem - it was written about a real person - the games teacher I had at school - she was the nastiest teacher ever 

Just to say that I would like to use your space poems as part of my literacy hour in my schools Space Week next week if you don't mind. Thanks
Clare Clements
West Monkton C of E Primary School
Taunton
Somerset

Hi Andrea,

Just a quick note to say that I love what you have done with this site. It's great to see so many poems written by people from all over the world. You have established a very wide community of young poets in the making!

Very well done again!
Will Le Bargy
, Guernesy, Channel Islands.

I have just returned from a Mississippi River boat and met a "Victorian Lady." That is--she is a member of a Victorian Ladies group in her home town. She was beautifully dressed in era dresses every day. Over the years, I have been a picker of costume jewelry so we had some very interesting talks about the era. I would like to send a copy of your poem about the Victorian Ladies

Dear Andrea,
i am a grade 8 student on the gold coast australia and i was wondering could i please have permission to use your "school poems" for my assignment! i have chosen you as my famous poet!
thankyou
gabby smith

Hello Andrea,

I wondered if you could help me further by giving me some quick advice?
I am keen to start writing basic children's books, aimed at the foundation stage/early years. I am also intending to illustrate myself.
Do I need to get several books together before approaching anyone?
Where do I start basically??

Kind Regards, Sam Rhodes

Hi Sam

No you do not need to write several books - I only started with one text. See the advice on my Get Published page (link on the top link bar). Also lots of advice on the web, do a search on 'getting published' or 'children's writing.' no easy answers it's very hard work indeed, good luck Andrea

Andrea Shavick,

My writier's workshop class was given an assignment to reach. We were allowed to pick any topic we liked. I picked superstition. In our project we have to included two or three poems on our topic. Your poems where humorous, and I was wondering if you would be willing to allow me to use them for my project? Thank you.
Cherae Franks

 

Passing Psychometric Tests - I think your book is really useful practice and have enjoyed it
immensely.

Regards Kevin Emamie

I teach speech and drama in Sydney, Australia and my students love funny poems for their exams.
Sandy Cooper

I really enjoyed the poem written by Jennifer Bird, it gave me the chance to discover that it is not just me who feels like that. I hope she will continue to write poems with success and encouragement. I wish i could tell her this myself, but as i cant, i hope you can. No worries if you can’t. Marie Butler
Hopefully she will read this - Andrea

hi i think your poems r gr8 i was wondering weather i could use 1 for my drama presentation for Ltterworth grammar school and community college? (Leicestershire)  

there are 3 which i am struggling to choose from they are school report miss nits (so funny!)
and predictable i think it might be school report though  nice and simple to remember!
is that ok?
thanks so much love hannahxx

Hannah Jane

Dear Andrea,

Just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed my visit to your site today. Thought I'd pass on our sites in case you found them appropriate to use them on your site as a link:
Abbey Press - www.geocities.com/abbeypress
Freelance Poetry & Drama - www.geocities.com/mollyfreeman2000
Belfast Lough Arts/Environmental Project
www.geocities.com/loughproject
Pushkin Project Page for St Brigid's National School
www.geocities.com/stbrigidsnational

Keep up the inspiring work!
Very best wishes,
Molly

Dear Andrea

I teach special needs and have a presentation evening coming up and would like very much for one of my students to read on stage one of your school poems.

thanks Anita

i would like to use these poems to read to my 6th grade class they are really good poems and i think that they should hear them!


sincerly, brittany nesseth

3d grader to Read "Predictable" at an end of year school poetry day.

Emma Shiffert, Richmond, VA

i think that miss nits is very funny. i think your site is brill and also i would like to say i like to eat seals i am very strange and eat bees and frogs i luv turkish people hehe lol. emma matthews

i think your poems are canny crap they cud be more interesting so haha on you .
sandra dee

hello i luv cheese. i think your poems are great they are very interesting please please write some good poems about chocolate cheese thankyou 

laura hardy, i live in south shields

Hey im shandy from Bellingham washington im in 7th grade and were doing poem reports and we have to look up poems and then write what we like about them. since it says that i cant use with out permision i thought i would ask.I wont take credit for our work and your anme will be posted on the report.Please get back to me as soon as u can so i can turn my homework in ontime thank you and by the way great writing.   Shandy

Hi

My son & I really like your poem 'Predictable' (somehow rings true?!!) and would like to use it in his leaving assembly next week. You will, of course, be given credit!

Hope this is OK, many thanks        


Dear Ms. Andrea Shavick,

I had the opportunity to visit your poetry page on internet. I read some of your school poems. I have just started a magazine for school children here in India. The name of the magazine is Shreya's Quizdom. I would like to give your intro as GUEST POET of Shreya's Quizdom for the July month issue and use two of your poems, namely: PREDICTABLE, DUMBO and MISS NITS. 

S.C. Mishra
Editor: Shreya's Quizdom

hello I liked the Cross Country poem. It was very enjoyable.
Victoria, from Jax, Florida,  USA

I would like to use one of your space poems in order to analyze it through the eyes of the main character in my book. I would not be doing anything with it other than handing a copy to my teacher with my analysis. The school is Crystal Lake Central in Illinios. Thanks Linnea

I have to find an interesting poem for my homework and write 5 questions about it.
I found your poems on the internet and really like them especially the ones about school.
Please may I use your poem called School Report for my homework.
My homework has to be in tomorrow and as always I have left it to the last minute. I do hope you get this in time.
Thank you Rhys Jones

Dear Andrea
The homework was a success. My friend Henry thought the poem was great.
I will read more of your poems on your website, especially ones about school and homework.
Thank you again
Rhys Jones aged 10yrs.

Hi my name is Tracy and i am a junior at Olton High School and i am writing you to ask for your permission to use a poem named Lucky Escape for an English project. we are assigned to look up poems and their authors to present them to the class. i live in Olton, Tx, USA. please email ASAP because the project is due by Monday May 17th, 2004) Thank You!